As a group we planned to do two new shots of the letter, because from our final draft we believe that it was not clear enough to the audience that it was an important prop/McGuffin object as it helps our to guide our film. We thought is was not clear as our feedback from our peers suggested that they did not realise that it had significant importance to our storyline.
So we felt it's significance needed to be shown in the opening and to also create more enigma surrounding the letter and we planned new shots that we would film. Two close up shots of the letter in someone's hand. We wanted the shots to just focus on the letter and for it to then to be turned over so the audience could read the name 'Callie' on it.
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